Verses From The Suburbs Of The World - N.0 - If...- Comments

The graphic is beautiful!

so why delay, why frustration of life if we are well doer we will earn good result from our doings come, let's do together live together peacefully, though humanity to one unity....

We are human sometimes feel as crown creation if believe in one Creator whatever; this port, this filed, forest, sea, ocean, city town, this fountain, mountain, suburb, beach, foods, everything for us- for human and animal like us those need to live in an estimated date- till expired fate, fortunate, destiny of our good life in our active hands- human hands as the conscientious crown creation

in an immense maze lost in the suburb of fate ......don't die in vain do not live in vain.....beautifully written on the activity of life; this life is our, this universe is also; all fates in our hand, we can decorate this world as our wish; so no need to die in vain and life idly; great poem penned; congrats for being selected as POD....deserves 10++

under this gray sky our life is completely contained in an immense maze lost in the suburb of fate entry and exit needle's eye a very fine poem and a fine graphic. tony

Your words reflect the importance of life. For the world is looking quite anxious and unstable at present.

Fantastic.....I pick the last stanza don't die in vain do not live in vain first and last say in the meanwhile a single certainty arises it is darkness that gives meaning to light and not the other way alike

The Italian part MAY make sense (I don't know; I can't read Italian) but the English part is totally unintelligible. What cretin at Poem Hunter selects these, anyway?

A perceptive write imbued with uplifting lines. Well expressed and crafted.

Great philosophy. It is the ugly that make you beautiful. It is the sadness which makes you happy. The dichotomy of the anatomy of life...the strife we carry with the edge of a knife.

A well authored poem of he day. Truly splendid. Congrats on your featured piece...5 stars+++