Vindictive Sanctuary Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Vindictive Sanctuary

Rating: 4.6


Introduction: Blindfolded the world fades today, optimism awaits tomorrow...

Lies have many expressions
Can make one follow the mistaken,
Love has countless sensations
Can make one feel awaken,
Seek out the truth from its buried nation
As the deception has made it forsaken

No one knows where you'd disappear
For things you care is what you feel,
No one knows of what you hear,
One day you will deem what's real
Ask Almighty to steer you clear
Help you save from your ordeal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Forougi 19 September 2011

High range of imagination can be seen here.A brilliant way of expressing...

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Bernard Snyder 07 September 2011

This again is another wonderful expression. Thanks for sharing!

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Anthony Zeigler 29 August 2011

'Lies have many expressions Can make one follow the mistaken, Love has countless sensations Can make one feel awaken, Seek out the truth from its buried nation As the deception has made it forsaken' I read that part and INSTANTLY fell in love with it. I love it. Awesomely written!

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Dylan Gaudreault 22 August 2011

i like this poem i relate 2 the idea of it very well written

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Christopher Cariad 18 August 2011

Beautifully written, the world is a lie and we each seek our own truths!

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Stevie Taite 17 October 2012

Dont think The Almighty will steer you, but experience will. In my opinion, if there is a God he is deeply goodand forgiving and found in all of us, just for such occasions as we need to draw on our inner strength and self worth! love the poem, just not very religious in this sense.

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Sandile Perfect Ngema 02 October 2011

Terrific poem. I like the content and great poem all around

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Rachelle Firman 29 September 2011

This one is more into your feelings i like this one

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Megan Anderton 24 September 2011

Very nicely penned, i love the way you write. You and i have a a rare talent in writing. thank you for sharing your poems with me.

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Louis Cecile 24 September 2011

Wise and deep words that is written with an almost effortless ease.

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