Fay Slimm

Rookie - 112 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Virtual Paradise. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Alongside the real is the virtual world.
Paradise realised, now proudly unfurled.
A new race of people, brought by machine
Brightening lives by technology's dream.
Phantom-like friendships, developing by
Tenuous air-waves aloft in the sky.
Producing connections which always meet
With response, - this on-line, unseen retreat
From everyday life makes a life of it's own.
Brings magical change from being alone.
Spectral soul-mates can appear from thin air
Made by transmitted message wrought with care.
Virtual heaven appears on earth's scene.
Mirage's marriages, - never quite being
But moon-shine reality, yet they provide
Real feelings of love no-one can deride.
Miraculous virtual paradise
Invents a contentment - - but is there a price?


Comments about Virtual Paradise. by Fay Slimm

  • Kevin Wells (10/15/2008 1:17:00 PM)

    Yup... there's always a price, Fay.
    If something seems too good to be true, it probably is!
    A masterly poem from one of Poemhunters' maestros.
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  • James Timothy Jarrett (10/14/2008 3:57:00 PM)

    Fay, I love the thought and the wording on this. 'Mirage's marriages' is exquisite. A definite 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (10/11/2008 4:40:00 AM)

    Well said Fay, you meet wonderful friends from all over the world, the things that divide us are all forgotten in the virtual world, the love of poetry and open heart... Andrew 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Tom BalchTom Balch (10/11/2008 3:49:00 AM)

    The price is more poems from you please.10 from Tom (Report)Reply

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  • Bob Gibson (10/11/2008 2:40:00 AM)

    i juggle both worlds, though they are eons apart
    my poetry's in one that's close to my heart
    the other takes its toll, between work and subsistence
    i can slip between them without any resistance
    Thank you my online, switched on, cybermate! regards from the two of us
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 11, 2008


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