Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Velvety Love. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Shimmering rich. it covers all previous
Hurt, warm softness asserts it's own power.
Reflecting light hourly, opulent hue, flowering
From shades of sensuous dyes, blaze the soul.

Falling in careful folds, newly found love
Kisses the heart. Velvet caresses wholly.
Lifts life into lightness. Hope can then move.

Like touching smooth velvet, dreams can revive.
Sinking in lustrous care, love will survive.

Comments about Velvety Love. by Fay Slimm

  • (12/21/2008 2:12:00 PM)

    Love that is true is alway always like velvet. for it can't but flow smooth and naturally.. (Report) Reply

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  • David Threadgold (12/16/2008 10:07:00 AM)

    Hi Fay. I agree with Andrew it reminds me of blue velvet, and I like your reference to the folds which suggest the warmth. thanks for an enjoyable read Regards Dave T (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2008 6:36:00 AM)

    Keep thinking of that song blue velvet.. wonderful poetry Fay.. Andrew 10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2008 5:57:00 AM)

    A poem soft as velvet itself and provides the warmth for your future beautiful write Fay 10 ++++ Chris (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2008 5:50:00 AM)

    very nice eloquent verses and write..lovely...10

    Ency Bearis
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 17, 2008

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