Wait For It Poem by dark girl

Wait For It

Rating: 5.0


cant believe how the nights became so calm without you..
i know am still thinking of you but just know that am not missing you..
maybe am still loving you too..
but dont think that i cant hate you..
you left me broken without turning around too see how much i've suffered & how much u hurted me..
you walked away like i didnt meant anything to you..
i felt the pain of every single lie you lied to me.. and it was hard to get out of it..
i wish one day you'll be back for me to start all over again and only that time you'll feel my pain you'll suffer like i did til the end..
you'll leave this world screaming just to find a way to get me back..
wait for it..you'll feel what i felt..you will feel my pain soon..



** i wrote this poem in my own words**
so i hope u like it..! !

SARA

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kali Abyss 19 January 2009

This is a very sad and deeply poem Dark girl...the poems I wrote I think that they born the day that the guy I loved betray me and leave me and kiss another girl...I though the wound will never heal, I hated him so much, I wanted to feel the same pain as I... but the time make me feel in love again with other person, and the hate that once feel now is gone, I cant tell you exactly how it vanish... but the time it heals all wounds and one day your heart will heal too =)

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Dolan Doran 18 January 2009

It's dark...very vindictive...i like the poem, though the format through me off a little..and the flow was hard to catch..but all in all, I like it....good job. :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 January 2009

An emotional poem. It happens in teen age love, but soon you will know what really love is....keep on writing. Best Wishes.

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sumaira .....ir 18 January 2009

Innocent love poem, nicely writin, cute teen age feeling in it like it...

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Luis Alvarado 18 January 2009

Love can really hurt! ! The pain is felt/ Good job! ! ~~

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Ken Suh 20 January 2009

lol like Tiffany said this is Amazing! ! ! ! beautiful :)

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 19 January 2009

this is too good for words.....it left me speechless and u r still an amzing writer! ! ! i hope u dont mind tht i print this off and show it to my friends

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Sebastine Humaemo 19 January 2009

words done from true love...........can see the pain n longing care in your lines dark girl.....n the way yu tried to express your pain to the one whom u loved much s awesome.....sebastine....10++.........

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Js Black 19 January 2009

We've all been there and felt that. Teriffic job and keep up the good work...Jeff.

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Genesis Learny 19 January 2009

i am so touched by this poem.i remember a time where ive felt lke this

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