Waiting Poem by Archita Kumar

Waiting

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I am waiting for you throughout my life
Only with the hope that you will come back to me;
Iam in pain since you have left me,
Almost a year has passed
I haven't seen you;
You know thatI have given birth to a baby girl! !
But no one is happy!
The happiness only includes me and you
because its our child
"SHE" is yours and mine.
You know her smile reminds me of you,
Hertwinkling eyes asks me
‘About you're;
Iwould say thatyou love her very much,
Her little fingers are waiting for your hand,
To hold her back.
Please come back soon papa! !
Please hold me in your lap;
I want to play with you,
I want to see you,
Mum and me are missing you
Please be come soon
Love you papa! ;
My love please come soon
Iam waiting for you.
Love Elsa

Waiting
Friday, March 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: classic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 01 March 2019

Write comment. A good start, Archita. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 02 March 2019

a great write! an emotional write!

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Archita Kumar 03 March 2019

It's tells a story about a lonely mother and a women left by her loved one in somewhere who longs to see her loved ones (her husband) .In the meanwhile she gave birth to a beautiful baby girl.The babygirl wants to be with her father and play with him.0

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2020

Please come back soon papa! ! Please hold me in your lap; I want to play with you, I want to see you, longing and waiting.. beautifully presented in simple verses full of emotions. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 May 2019

Birth of life! ! Birth of a baby girl; In the arms of her mother. Grown up today! ! Seeking for her father. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 March 2019

do kindly read my bestest poem MOMS SMILES YOU WILL LIKE Thanks miss poetess you have poetic essence and acumen

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 March 2019

I have devoted all my life composing poetry warning girls just don't believe in him and as you, (ONE) do give in he will enjoy and run then you will be sadly spun with his young one and he may also say pop who? ? ? how would i know you were the first one for me or one of the many so warn all girls but to listen me are hardly any

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 March 2019

Feelings are nicely captured in the poem.

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