JUST as a wave is lifted by the shore,
Then breaks across the slowly rising sand,
So as I watch you weep my feelings pour
Across the wash of what I understand.
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lil Gal, you express yourself with passion, you pour our your heart. Your poems come directly from heart without any artifice. May God bless you. CP
waiting, sometimes painful, sometimes hopeful, either one, if it's for our beloved, would do us good in some way..
Great flow of words with fine imagery applied...A poem structured of love...giving assurance truely loving and innocent...10
Poetic vision, staying on shore with sandy heart! ! ! ! just this sand gets somewhat wet! and this is all......... it is lovely feeling dear friend!