Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Waiting For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

JUST as a wave is lifted by the shore,
Then breaks across the slowly rising sand,
So as I watch you weep my feelings pour
Across the wash of what I understand.
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lil island Gal
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Muhammad Ali 27 April 2009

Poetic vision, staying on shore with sandy heart! ! ! ! just this sand gets somewhat wet! and this is all......... it is lovely feeling dear friend!

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Reihaneh Jalalian 10 February 2009

i enjoyed your poem. it was beautiful 10 from me

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C. P. Sharma 09 February 2009

lil Gal, you express yourself with passion, you pour our your heart. Your poems come directly from heart without any artifice. May God bless you. CP

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sumaira .....ir 09 February 2009

wow! ! superb lines lovely write 10/10

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Denvor Fernandez 07 February 2009

Here I come.

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Kite Remedy 03 February 2009

waiting, sometimes painful, sometimes hopeful, either one, if it's for our beloved, would do us good in some way..

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Bob Blackwell 31 January 2009

You use words in a very beautiful way, lovely poem.

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Niharika Singh 31 January 2009

a poem so soothing to mind and more to heart all the best

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Catrina Heart 29 January 2009

Great flow of words with fine imagery applied...A poem structured of love...giving assurance truely loving and innocent...10

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