Waiting To Be Delivered Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Waiting To Be Delivered

Rating: 5.0

As if, he would come to deliver me
From this dreary town
Where nothing happens
I dreamt of his touch between my thighs
But I stop that when his appearance became rare
Making me yearn for him more
Still, I wait to be deliver
I don't what would kill me first
Waiting or this boring town

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 22 July 2024

Love is always worth trying though! .. Ever so heart movingly composed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 22 July 2024

Waiting on a heart, is one of the most hardest and agonizing things! .. Emotions run strong and deep and the uncertainty of letting them flow or giving up and letting go...

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Richard Wlodarski 20 July 2024

You perfectly describe what Dylan (and others) had felt when they were living in a dreary town. After they escaped...look what they accomplished!

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Anjandev Roy 20 July 2024

Still, I wait to be deliver...... significant.... thank u, LeeAnn..

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Beautiful! " I don't what would kill me first Waiting or this boring town" is the final intrigue. Loved the poem with its tinge of sensuality. Top score and added to MyFav

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