Walk Of Life Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Walk Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Grandpa! Your walking stick knows how many pebbles that you hit?
But the pebbles never hit you on your walkover.

*Some unsophisticated friends are like that.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 October 2008

This is very funny, Nimal. And again, the haiku form comes to mind as I read it - haiku with wit, perhaps. Wonderful, original poetry. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 09 October 2008

The child who calls you Grandpa has an artless, genuine charm that is delightful to behold. Ten for both of you. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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