Jonathan ROBIN

Freshman - 547 Points (22 September / London)

War 0065 Initial Version - Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

With world at war the waisted women pale,
drops of wasted water plop without a pail.
Civilians weep and wail while harms assail,
physicians, profiteers, have arms for sale.

(23 March 1975)


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Initial version written 23 March 1975 revised 20 September 2008 As a general rule, the number in the title refers to the chronological order of the first version unless the poem was omitted from the original list and rediscovered. Revised versions retain the initial number. Kindly request permission before posting elsewhere.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, March 25, 2013


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