War Poem by Abraham de la Torre

War

Rating: 5.0


Unpremeditated, just a reflexive blink,
Was not as startled as the glitter of grime
Against the sun-streaked light.

The idea of a memorandum-laden airplane
Stirred the rust of my machine guns.

Unrelenting, my magazine would spew
Spurts of rage till the argument
Yields to the louder, more determined Soldier.

I would give my victory no rest.
It will die, of its own accord,
Among the intricate complexities of
Newer, better armament.

Rubber bands. Rubber sheaths.

My conscious song would be a beat
Rhythmic as a heart
Even as it skips
A splintered auricle.

I would want to be a mutineer.
I would hop and skip and leave them dead.

Ensconced in silk,
My wandering aircraft describes
A pocket.
The enemy is avoided.
Such daredevil feat.

The maneuver interrupting
The train of deployed dust.

Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: airplane,soldier
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 25 February 2009

anyone the know poetry will say this was a good write. but there are normal ppl.tht know know certain things about poetry. I could give this poem a 10 but some1 might have a different oppinion not the best I have seen but good 10s

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Meggie Gultiano 26 November 2008

an excellent piece. I love this

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Hunter Dasten 13 November 2008

You managed to articulate the uncertainty of war very well. Truly a fantastic write. Keep up the good work my friend!

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Ency Bearis 12 November 2008

wonderful simile poem...eloquent verses well delivered...excellent..A10+ Ency Bearis

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Abraham de la Torre

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Bacacay, Albay, Philippines
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