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War Of Humanity - Poem by SALINI NAIR

It was a nurtured land
Flourish the nature on her lap
Splendid was its crops
They grow with all the vigor

One day someone ploughed that land
Spread pesticides on her jaws
Then sow some alien seed
She speculates and falls asleep

Then it turned to be a deserted land
Nothing flourished on her wing
Her story turned to past
There even rain fails to shower

Women is like a nurtured land
It flourishes with love and peace
There blossoms a lovely sprout
So that it will scent humanity

When sword raises at her dignity
Remember it will swing above your head
Pesticides there will spread hassle
As your tree is still on this island! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Topic(s) of this poem: woman

Poet's Notes about The Poem

dignity of woman should raise..violence and rape of children and woman definitely take this world to hell...................

Comments about War Of Humanity by SALINI NAIR

  • Valsa George (8/4/2014 10:52:00 AM)

    There is always a close affinity between women and Nature! Both flourish with care and proper tending! Just as assault on nature or land robs of its fertility, women when treated with disrespect and indignity will fail to yield good citizens! For good crops land has to be watered and given manure. In the same way, women have to be protected and loved to foster a sound generation! Great write! (Report) Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/4/2014 9:57:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with fantastic message for every woman. Woman should raise their voice especially when their dignity is attacked.

    Beautiful way you have described woman....
    Yes, woman is like a nurtured land.It flourishes with love and peace.

    I loved reading it.
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  • (8/4/2014 7:47:00 AM)

    Very sensible and rational approach to the good cause of humanity as women are the foundation from where
    the humanity and civilisation spring and flourish through time and space to every corner of society................
    very well composed adorned with very strong lines
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  • Akhtar Jawad (8/4/2014 6:44:00 AM)

    Saliny I fully agree with you. remains of these Devtas have been found in Japan and the Japanese call themselves as sons of Devtas. It appears that Devtas came to this earth from different and far distant planets that is why there are different races in the different parts of the world. Probably their orbit is a very big ellipse and one day they will be close to us once again and contact us too.
    When sword raises at her dignity
    Remember it will swing above your head
    Pesticides there will spread hassle
    As your tree is still on this island! !
    A true message is it. A well wrote poem.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (8/4/2014 3:42:00 AM)

    scent humanity, good writing, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, August 4, 2014

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