Sarah Ibrahim

Rookie - 10 Points (18/11/1984 / Riyadh)

...Warm Less... - Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Sun in the middle…so high
But..no rays warm the ground...
Feathers never reach the sky
And Silence is the only Sound...

Sarah Ibrahim ©


Comments about ...Warm Less... by Sarah Ibrahim

  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (5/25/2009 10:42:00 AM)

    Too short but very beautiful poem.
    10 for this excellent work.
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  • Reetessh Sabrr (3/28/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    i felt some incompleteness or may be i missed the gist, still i feel the incompleteness is the gist... (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (3/9/2009 6:42:00 AM)

    beautiful imagery in four lines Sarah...i liked this artful bit...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Water Lily (2/11/2009 7:39:00 PM)

    very smart and and abstract ! I absolutely loved it! (Report)Reply

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  • ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~!! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (2/9/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    so cute and meaningful.....keep writing dear (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 31, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 15, 2009


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