Sarah Ibrahim

Rookie - 10 Points (18/11/1984 / Riyadh)

Breaking Clouds - Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

We lose ourselves to the sky
We grow wings and we start to Fly

But once we lose the Track of ourselves
We Step Down, take off our wings and put them on shelves

We Run to the nearest Highway
Rainy, Sunny, Windy or Foggy. We stay

In hope to understand what we've missed
To know that in Each Darken Corner. Life..Somehow is blessed

To Realize that After a Rainy day
Sun will Breaks the Dark clouds with a single Ray

Sarah Ibrahim ©


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  • Akram Awadat (6/23/2009 1:13:00 PM)

    nice poem, deep meaning
    i like it
    10+
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  • Afzal Shauq (5/28/2009 7:42:00 PM)

    much romantic one... liked it too.. and hope my poetry will also touch your heart... best of luck 10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Randy Hogan (3/2/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    For i can not fly for my wings are broken.
    before my lifeless body hit the ground,
    my sweet angel shall burst the eastern sky...
    the amber rays gentle spray
    through the clouds
    and paint the landscape with Peace and Love....
    once more denied but not forsaken
    Wow! ! ! this poem is soul moving...10+++++++++++
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  • Naseer Ahmed NasirNaseer Ahmed Nasir (1/9/2009 7:30:00 AM)

    The poem is ingrained with simple but sound words spreading an inspirational message of hope which always stay alive. (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (12/10/2008 1:13:00 PM)

    This is a powerful reflection i can say!
    Fine wording! nice rhyme/rhythm
    10+
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  • April Breeland (11/22/2008 2:18:00 PM)

    Breath taking Beautiful.....Great Poem (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.Wardha Jawdat (10/7/2008 11:58:00 AM)

    very very nice..hope suffused poem..makes one feel light and hopefgul..love how you go from the point of angelic form to losing onesself and then rediscovery through hope. (Report)Reply

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  • Yasser Koor (10/4/2008 5:08:00 PM)

    what a wonderful words
    It is nice and lovely poem
    I like it especially
    Sky, , , fly, , , ourselves, , , shelves, , , highway, stay
    And ……
    it is perfect
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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (10/1/2008 2:24:00 PM)

    a lovely thoughts..well written/rhymes..jamila sadika...

    Ency Bearis
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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (9/26/2008 4:46:00 PM)

    Nice to read, lovely the last two lines-

    'To Realize that After a Rainy day
    Sun will Breaks the Dark clouds with a single Ray'
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  • Reetessh Sabrr (9/26/2008 3:56:00 PM)

    there is a positive call from mother nature
    inspiring to ask for the human life

    bautiful sara!
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  • Aijaz Asif (9/23/2008 1:53:00 PM)

    very beautiful thoughts nice done with rhymes [sky/fly]...thanks 10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 15, 2009


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