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Breaking Clouds

Rating: 4.9
We lose ourselves to the sky
We grow wings and we start to Fly

But once we lose the Track of ourselves
We Step Down, take off our wings and put them on shelves

We Run to the nearest Highway
Rainy, Sunny, Windy or Foggy. We stay

In hope to understand what we've missed
To know that in Each Darken Corner. Life..Somehow is blessed
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Akram Awadat 23 June 2009
nice poem, deep meaning i like it 10+
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Afzal Shauq 28 May 2009
much romantic one... liked it too.. and hope my poetry will also touch your heart... best of luck 10+++
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Randy Hogan 02 March 2009
For i can not fly for my wings are broken. before my lifeless body hit the ground, my sweet angel shall burst the eastern sky... the amber rays gentle spray through the clouds and paint the landscape with Peace and Love.... once more denied but not forsaken Wow! ! ! this poem is soul moving...10+++++++++++
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 January 2009
The poem is ingrained with simple but sound words spreading an inspirational message of hope which always stay alive.
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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 December 2008
This is a powerful reflection i can say! Fine wording! nice rhyme/rhythm 10+
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Breath taking Beautiful.....Great Poem
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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 07 October 2008
very very nice..hope suffused poem..makes one feel light and hopefgul..love how you go from the point of angelic form to losing onesself and then rediscovery through hope.
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Yasser Koor 04 October 2008
what a wonderful words It is nice and lovely poem I like it especially Sky, , , fly, , , ourselves, , , shelves, , , highway, stay And …… it is perfect
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Ency Bearis 01 October 2008
a lovely thoughts..well written/rhymes..jamila sadika... Ency Bearis
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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 September 2008
Nice to read, lovely the last two lines- 'To Realize that After a Rainy day Sun will Breaks the Dark clouds with a single Ray'
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