Sarah Ibrahim

Rookie - 10 Points (18/11/1984 / Riyadh)

...Murder... - Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Scene playing in my Head
Every time Anger gets overfed

Screams inside making their way
To the outside…
where they Attack your face, and starts to play

And Hands…Stretching; Reaching your throat
To Grab it tight.
And Stop the Pain your words have brought

To hold the Air from going in…
The heart that you pretend…
Knows the Virtue…knows the Sin

Million times this Scene play
Where Sanity have no place to stay

Cause with Anger and Sadness
Happiness…Is murdered…
And the Mind…dancing in madness.


Sarah Ibrahim ©


Comments about ...Murder... by Sarah Ibrahim

  • Roland Bastien (7/21/2009 9:57:00 PM)

    You capture in an accurate and expressive technic the insight of our human nature - (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (6/21/2009 3:34:00 PM)

    clean and significant...........10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (5/25/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    'Cause with Anger and Sadness
    Happiness…Is murdered…
    And the Mind…dancing in madness.'

    Nicely presented,10++
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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (5/1/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    sensitive write, Sarah...you use a strong and attractive vocab nicely to express your thoughts...good piece...thanks...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Akram Awadat (4/22/2009 2:58:00 PM)

    touching poem, well done
    thanks for sharing sarah
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  • Naseer Ahmed NasirNaseer Ahmed Nasir (4/17/2009 6:24:00 PM)

    A murder within heart and mind.....No dagger, no blood. Anger kills many other feelings but sadness is always creative. Good write, Sarah.

    Best Wishes
    Naseer
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  • Reetessh Sabrr (4/4/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    good write sarah (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 8, 2009


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