Hurt... Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

Hurt...

Rating: 5.0


your nice words wont do me Good no more

You'v hurt me deep inside for sure

Stapped me while i was looking for the(i understand) door

yet you ask me to give you more and more

i will do that but it will never be like befor

a Broken heart is hard to Cure

No matter what you do i don't care any more

You're from the past, and I already Closed the door

Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dannah O 29 December 2007

nice sarah, i realy like it u can be a great poet.. wish u the best of luck.. hope no one will ever hurt u

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Rox Ad 09 January 2008

Nice poem Sarah.. u r talented, keep it up my friend..

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Chris Newlash 23 September 2008

Loved it!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 September 2008

'No matter what you do i don't care any more You're from the past, and I already Closed the door' Beautiful poem with nice ending. Love it.10++

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Yaseen Anwer 29 September 2008

Very energetic deserve 10 on 10...

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Darkness J 27 September 2009

A poem full of inner pain of a broken heart. But eventhough it still hurts, time mends our wounds. Love it

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

'a Broken heart is hard to Cure'... well said Sarah...that line there constitutes the soul of the poem...good piece...thanks...10

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John Smith 21 January 2009

Beautiful stuff there, very real emotions.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 January 2009

Even if you are hurt but life still moves on. Search and you will surely find another door.

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 05 December 2008

oh how sad is this dear? yeah its really hurting and you are a nice poetess.keep it up

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