Sarah Ibrahim

Rookie - 10 Points (18/11/1984 / Riyadh)

Hurt... - Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

your nice words wont do me Good no more

You'v hurt me deep inside for sure

Stapped me while i was looking for the(i understand) door

yet you ask me to give you more and more

i will do that but it will never be like befor

a Broken heart is hard to Cure

No matter what you do i don't care any more

You're from the past, and I already Closed the door

Sarah Ibrahim ©


Comments about Hurt... by Sarah Ibrahim

  • Darkness J (9/27/2009 2:42:00 PM)

    A poem full of inner pain of a broken heart. But eventhough it still hurts, time mends our wounds.
    Love it
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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (7/2/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    'a Broken heart is hard to Cure'...

    well said Sarah...that line there constitutes the soul of the poem...good piece...thanks...10
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  • John Smith (1/21/2009 11:55:00 AM)

    Beautiful stuff there, very real emotions. (Report)Reply

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  • Naseer Ahmed NasirNaseer Ahmed Nasir (1/9/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    Even if you are hurt but life still moves on. Search and you will surely find another door. (Report)Reply

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  • ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~!! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (12/5/2008 8:32:00 AM)

    oh how sad is this dear?
    yeah its really hurting and you are a nice poetess.keep it up
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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/15/2008 8:59:00 AM)

    You can close the door..............but don't close your heart yet.........not yet! (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/8/2008 1:38:00 PM)

    finely penned! some hurts too deep! no way to reopen door! ........10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Yaseen Anwer (9/29/2008 6:15:00 PM)

    Very energetic
    deserve 10 on 10...
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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (9/25/2008 4:49:00 PM)

    'No matter what you do i don't care any more
    You're from the past, and I already Closed the door'

    Beautiful poem with nice ending. Love it.10++
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  • Chris NewlashChris Newlash (9/23/2008 9:25:00 PM)

    Loved it! (Report)Reply

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  • Rox Ad (1/9/2008 1:29:00 PM)

    Nice poem Sarah..
    u r talented, keep it up my friend..
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  • Dannah O (12/29/2007 1:32:00 PM)

    nice sarah, i realy like it
    u can be a great poet..
    wish u the best of luck..
    hope no one will ever hurt u
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 29, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 15, 2009


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