Thursday, April 7, 2022

Waves Across The Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

She's afraid of living, she's afraid of
dying. God I miss her smiling. I miss
her laugh, I miss the days gone past.
I hit rewind, but I can't find, those eyes
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Rebecca Navarre
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2022

Wonderful poetic lines that give hope. Very inspiring.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 April 2022

A very touching and heartwarming poem so tenderly and beautifully expressed.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 April 2022

Becca i feel the presence of my mum and dad in this poem. it made me cry out with joy because i thought i was the only one with these feelings Bravo!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 April 2022

Becca, i love all your poems. They are filled with divinity which makes it so loveable....Top score dear.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 29 April 2022

Life is like a wave with ups and downs. We feel so helpless. All we can do is to accept the situation and wait patiently for God's grace.

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