We Have Received Your Greetings Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

We Have Received Your Greetings

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With love and affection
You have sent best wishes,
Writing congratulations!
You have given greetings.

Being topper is nice but,
Certainly we rise and fall,
In between we move up and dawn,
Still we hope the best forever.

Thank you dear poet for caring,
At least you have seen success,
Being happy in friend's joy,
This expresses your nice attitude.

There is competition among us,
But still love is there to bind,
We stand and move and feel light,
Beauty of greetings is received.

Thank you, thank for message,
We are glad very much in truth,
We hope you are fine in capital,
May God bring happiness for you.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,06 September 2017. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, September 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: greetings,love,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2018

Being topper is nice but/Certainly we rise and fall /In between we move up and dawn/Still we hope the best forever……..a poem with a sweet message! Each of us has some originality and distinct trait (No one on earth can rank us) ! You have rightly pointed out that one should not be overwhelmed by ups nor should he be disheartened by downs. Ups and downs are part of life. Temporary pleasure in ups has no meaning at all! Very honest write! ! Thanks for sharing dear sir

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2017

There is competition among us! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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