We Have Travelled To The Capital City Poem by Ravi Kopra

We Have Travelled To The Capital City

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Journey to the capital city
was my holy journey to God
When I was born, a pundit ji
whispered holy mantras
in my tiny red ears
I stopped crying instantly
my mother told me years later

Blessed with god at birth
blessed throughout my life
with my children, my lovely wife
I am on the pilgrimage seeing
holy temples, crosses of Christ

For his final blessings till
one day suddenly I leave
this kal-yuga and appear
before him with folded hands
lying down on his feet
asking no blessings
but just a little touch
on my head near my choti
that pundit ji gave me
when I was ready for marrying
my lovely wife who is here
sitting with me smiling.
What more blessings
do I need?

-a tribute to the poemhunter poet Kumarmani Mahakul who
posted a poem here today with a similar title.

Friday, November 3, 2017
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2017

Having the holy journey to God through mantra and meditation in life is wise ever to gain his grace and wisdom. With family having mother's bless going to pilgrimage gives unlimited happiness and brings fortune. God gives his tender touch teaching us about truth of his creation. We smile and no more cry by his grace. An excellently penned poem of review and tribute to my poem which you have presented here is a nice commentary poem that expresses your higher quality of perceptional and poetic ability. I am deeply touched by your tribute poem and kind words. My God bring happiness for you and your family.....10

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