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Khalid Ahmed's Urdu Ghazal: Tark-E-Talluqat Pe Roya Na Tu Na Main In English Translation

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At our break up you didn't cry nor did I
How come then you couldn't sleep nor did I

Circumstances were such we were stalled
You didn't care for our past memories nor did I

Our differences though were in large numbers
In open, you didn't complain nor did I

Our differences weren't large to be unresolvable
You didn't spill tears over them nor did I
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Sunday, March 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: break up
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Rajnish Manga 19 March 2019
(3) We must admit that there is no hard and fast rule or mechanism involved in translation. What we need is to pick up the essence or the spirit behind the observation made by the writer and then to transport it into our translation with sophistication. The literal meaning of certain words is given below: bar-gashta = angry / upset / alienated / hostile / disillusioned / ????? / ???? falak / Asman = sky / God / Almighty / ???? / ?????
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Ravi Kopra 20 March 2019
Thanks again, What Urdu to Hindi or English dictionary do you use, BTW?
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Rajnish Manga 21 March 2019
I've got three dictionaries for the purpose: 1. Oxford English-Urdu Dictionary 2. ?????- ????? ??????? (entry words are in Hindi) (???????? ????? ????????, ????) 3. Urdu-Hindi Lughat (Concise ?????-????? ???????) (Published by Urdu Kitab Ghar, Aligarh) Besides that, internet too is a great help. Thanks.
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Rajnish Manga 19 March 2019
(2) Whenever we looked up, Heavens did we see But you didn't get alienated with God nor did I
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Rajnish Manga 19 March 2019
(1) Thank you very much, Ravi, for your kind words in response to my comments. I have tried to translate the last she'r of the ghazal which follows as under: (jab bhi nazar uThi to falak ki taraf uThi bar-gashta asman se goya na tu na maiñ)
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Rajnish Manga 17 March 2019
Excellent translation, that too, in the ghazal form itself. Great work, Ravi. You may do a re-look at the last she'r of the ghazal and may like to revise the same: jab bhi nazar uThi to falak ki taraf uThi........(We didn't see eye to eye and looked at the sky) bar-gashta asman se goya na tu na maiñ....(Neither you were upturned nor was I)
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Ravi Kopra 18 March 2019
Thanks for your input. I was for sometime stuck with the last line of the ghazal. Perhaps it escaped my interpretation. Could you please explain it to me in simple Hindi or English for revision. I appreciate your interest in my translations. I have recently been giving a new form to your translations, just in the first few lines. I hope you do not mind. And if you do like, you can come with another translation of yours of the same poem...
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