We Loved Old Road Maps Comments

The extended metaphor beautifully engages us, draws us in, invites us for a drive- and we willingly oblige, enjoying the scenery too much to complain or glance away, as it reaches the final poignant destination of revelation, that we were never really just touring- we were living. A delightfully envisioned and thoughtfully crafted piece of poetry. Thank you, dear author, for sharing this.

Your poem is incredibly evocative of simpler days gone by- - full of fresh, vibrant imagery. Kudos to you!