We Loved Old Road Maps Poem by Mary Angela Douglas

Mary Angela Douglas

Mary Angela Douglas

Little Rock, Arkansas United States of America

We Loved Old Road Maps

Rating: 4.5


[to my grandfather, Milton B. Young, King of the Triple A Trip Tik]

we loved old road maps of cheerful design
the brochure people motoring
with wide smiles

the mother in red lipstick, an orange shirtwaist dress
her chiffon scarf blowing in a motoring wind
the father sure of the route.steady hands on the wheel.

a twinkle set to go off in either eye
as if it were Christmas on the Fourth of July.

the backseat children leaning forward
as if expecting the world for dessert.
or burgundy cherry ice cream at the next Howard Johnson's.

old roadmaps so waffle cone crisp in their delineations.

so perfect folded up impossible to fold back up again
except as a magic trick.
on any road you could find another service station

another road map, in case this one wasn't working.
if only life had been that way. All Firestone caroled,
the routes marked out in red and blue

and everything to scale.
as it is.
we are glad

there is any road at all.

mary angela douglas 15 march 2017

Wednesday, March 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: car,childhood,road,vacation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 15 March 2017

The extended metaphor beautifully engages us, draws us in, invites us for a drive- and we willingly oblige, enjoying the scenery too much to complain or glance away, as it reaches the final poignant destination of revelation, that we were never really just touring- we were living. A delightfully envisioned and thoughtfully crafted piece of poetry. Thank you, dear author, for sharing this.

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Kevin Scanlon 15 March 2017

Your poem is incredibly evocative of simpler days gone by- - full of fresh, vibrant imagery. Kudos to you!

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Mary Angela Douglas

Mary Angela Douglas

Little Rock, Arkansas United States of America
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