We'Re Stuck In That Place Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

We'Re Stuck In That Place

Rating: 4.9


I visited her at the hospital ward
smiled my ladybird
baby delivered!

Her two ponytails in red ribbon
not a woman she was
but a girl overgrown!

In her arms lay a little fairy
wasn't just a baby
but a piece of me!

Beamed its face looking at me
recognized joyously
here was daddy!

She, me, and our baby
we're stuck in that place
ever happily!

Thursday, August 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
All my resolves not to make poems out of my dreams fail.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dinesan Madathil 28 August 2014

What a splendid recollection Pradipji? Poetry here comes down to our ears and sings a melodious song about togetherness of the best kind.

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Amitava Sur 29 August 2014

A classic moment of the life you have pictured. Possibly the most eventful in your life ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Valsa George 29 August 2014

A beautiful and immortal moment in life recaptured! A sweet song of contentment and joy!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 August 2014

Profound piece with great reminiscence of great event of one's life.......pradipji......10/10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 28 August 2014

Congrates being a father, a guardian and rewarded(Blessed with) with the heavenly gift life is such lovely poem expressing hail a lot of happiness thanks Pradip enjoy with your deep 10

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Lorraine Colon 28 August 2014

Beautiful picture - the memories of things that make life worth living.

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