Tuesday, April 5, 2016

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Rating: 4.1

Richard propped up the bottles
like bowling pins
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Deborah Landau
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Sandra Feldman 22 April 2016

A dream perhaps or nightmare were reality and fantasy are mixed, illogically, as dreams are. But the reader feels it and can see it too. Quiet a poem!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 April 2016

A beautifully envisioned great poem with a fantastic flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing it here.

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Savita Tyagi 22 April 2016

Wow! What a poem! Super expressions! Super skill! A modern poem in every way!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 22 April 2016

Fantastic expression to expose poetic passion. Beauty sometimes makes all the objects useless. Thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 April 2016

Very nice. Thanks for sharing and congrats.

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Akhil Raveendran 22 April 2016

CONGRATULATION FOR SELECTING YOU AS MODERN POET OF THE DAY..

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 April 2016

It makes me hopeless! With the muse of your life. Thanks for sharing.

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