Were You In Ecstasy? Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

Were You In Ecstasy?

Rating: 4.9


I heard your screams in the night.
Were you in ecstasy?

Did your lover play on his flute
And lift you to the heavens of joy?

Did he quench your thirst
And made you a slave of love?

Did you smell his sweat
And feel your heart is moist?

Did you see a rainbow bowing down to you
And birds with perfumed wings
flying around you?

Look!
Glowworms are coming to dance with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ankur Natu 07 May 2010

haha....most of your poems are sort of out of my genre lol....iam more of a philosophical poet....iam incapable of reviewing this one...: P

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Sranisha Francis 27 October 2015

Look! Glowworms are coming to dance with you. so wunderfully expressed.

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Rudy We 26 June 2010

Did you see a rainbow bowing down to you And birds with perfumed wings flying around you? perfumed imagination it is........... rainbow bowing down to you and birds of perfumed wings.......... wonderful coinage..........

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Anany Anee 22 June 2010

Did your lover play on the flute to lift you to the heavens? ecstacy.. in love.. dreams tears and heavings sobs and love.. all different experiences...... of love.. thank you for sharing

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Malini Kadir 19 May 2010

yes! this is imagination taking flight! a nd the flow...it is simply superb!

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Jeesa Rose 08 May 2010

such a great imagination! ! ! ! keep sharing Thank You.

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