Jessica Dehn

Rookie - 188 Points (May 8,1986)

What Do You See? - Poem by Jessica Dehn

Who do you see when you look at me?
Do you see joyful laughs and happy smiles, and think oh what a pretty doll we see?
Do you see the hidden tear and frightful fears, and shake your head and that broken thing?
Broken doll or Barbie doll, which do I appear?
What do you see when you look at me?

Comments about What Do You See? by Jessica Dehn

  • Amber Griggs (2/5/2014 10:03:00 PM)

    It's like you took the feelings, and thoughts right out of my head and molded them into perfect words! I to feel this way! I see a strong beautiful Doll who out shines Barbie any day; P p.s I love how my verification code is 666 lol (Report) Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (2/3/2014 12:37:00 AM)

    A short, beautiful poem this is!
    'What do you see when you look at me? ' - A question not always asked, but always 'a soul in love' wants to inquire from her/his lover.
    Hmm...Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder!
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  • Donnie Wolff (1/25/2014 2:49:00 PM)

    I see a poetic sadness, but I guess that's what makes us who we are. Nice poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 23, 2014

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