Melissa Patty

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What Hurts The Most - Poem by Melissa Patty

Hurting inside beyond my fears
I just wish I could hold back all my tears
Your gone, and you took everything
with you
There's a hole in my heart and I don't know what to do
What hurts the most is this feeling I have trapped in my mind
Take me to a better place where happiness I can find.

Melissa Patty

Topic(s) of this poem: hurt

Form: Epic

Comments about What Hurts The Most by Melissa Patty

  • (8/14/2015 6:53:00 PM)

    Liked this beautiful poem................................. (Report)Reply

    Melissa Patty(8/15/2015 3:59:00 AM)

    Thankyou very much.

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  • Lyn Paul (8/14/2015 5:55:00 PM)

    Heartfelt words expressed. In living I have fought many battles and won, You will too. At the time it seems like never and forever yet it is not. Under a tree with a pen/ paper is a good beginning.
    Thank You for sharing these words.

    Melissa Patty(8/15/2015 4:03:00 AM)

    Thankyou for your really kind words i really appreciate it! That is so true.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 14, 2015

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