Melissa Patty

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This Feeling Inside Without You Here - Poem by Melissa Patty

Tell me how to stop this pain
It hurts so bad it's driving me insane
I feel lost, I don't know where to go
Everything is tumbling down and my heart stops to flow
Life is tough, Life is unfair
All I want is happiness to love and share
Sometimes I think to myself Why me?
Having this feeling inside is always with me wherever I may be
I miss you dearly
Is the love I have for you is truly sincerely
I wish I had the power to bring you back again
Through these long long years drift by I'm more in pain
You're my angel that shines in the heaven's above
As you're my world who I will always love
Hold me forever tight
Until we meet again upon the golden light
Help me through my journey, help me through my way
I hold all the special memories I have with you to get me through each and everyday
Heaven as got a special angel that has a very loving heart
Love you millions to the moon and back, I will always know you're with me wherever I may start
You're my inspiration, you are my diamond in the sky
I miss you in all that I cry
Forever I will hold you in my heart and know that you are watching over me
In my journey through life I will have the most incredible memory of someone that one day I hope to be.

Miss you now, miss you always R.I P Mum x

By Melissa Patty

Topic(s) of this poem: tribute

Form: Ballad


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this poem in tribute of my mum. I'ts been nearly 6 years without her and I wrote this poem in memory of her <3

Comments about This Feeling Inside Without You Here by Melissa Patty

  • Sylvia Frances Chan (7/30/2018 8:20:00 PM)

    Congratulations for you as Member Poem Of the Day! Hurray! and WOW! Most Beautiful Tribute! . A 10+++++++ for the vote (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (7/23/2018 8:47:00 PM)

    The emotions and sentiments of a loving daughter flow throughout like a sad tune of a violin, the reader starts to paint a portrait of her mother in his mind, how great was the mother and how loving is the daughter. A very good selection as Members Poem, congrats! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/23/2018 7:27:00 PM)

    A mum becomes dearer, fonder, nearer and even prettier when she leaves us for ever. We all feel the same as you for the mother. Thanks for sharing the lovely thoughts. Congrats for the well deserved positioning. (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (7/23/2018 7:07:00 PM)

    I miss my parents too. I don't think I have written about that. You have inspired me to think.
    Congrats, Melissa.
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  • Chan Mongol (7/23/2018 12:43:00 PM)

    The poet has constructed the poem with her best inner feelings. I love the rhythm, rhymes and the poem deserves ++++10. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/23/2018 2:34:00 AM)

    Is the love I have for you is truly sincerely
    I wish I had the power to bring you back again...........strong desire expressed touchingly. It is really a great tribute to mother beautifully executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
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  • Magdalena Biela (7/23/2018 2:20:00 AM)

    Dearest Melissa, don't ask why me? , just write, write to her, about her, for her, for SHE is alive as long as you carry her memory in your heart, in your poems...Remember e.e. cunning: i carry your heart / i carry it with my heart...Many children loose parents before their time and they find a way to keep them alive...You have poetry...Why you? Nobody knows, only the Heaven...Be happy and congratulations for today your poem and your Mother are the poem of the day...All my heart... (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (7/23/2018 1:17:00 AM)

    Such a heartfelt expression of love of a daughter to her beloved mother who is already gone... congrats for being chosen, Melissa...10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (7/23/2018 12:59:00 AM)

    Oh; kindred affectionate pain penetrates the heart vigorously!

    lovely written from the heart of souvenir..........10++++
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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (7/23/2018 12:54:00 AM)

    I have such a Mum too, my late Mum, my still beloved late Mum, and as years go by, we will NEVER forget her, but we will mourn in grief about her constantly, like you are doing still. I know these emotive feelings, I just KNOW them and your most heart wrenching poem says it all. Grateful to God that I have met this poem and have read. Congratulations for you as Member Poem Of the Day! Hurray! and WOW! Most Beautiful Tribute! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/23/2018 12:51:00 AM)

    This poem lacks sincerity. I was surprised I made it to POD with this particularly with all my identies on this site. Oh well deja vu. (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (7/23/2018 12:23:00 AM)

    All I want is happiness to love and share
    Sometimes I think to myself Why me?
    Having this feeling inside is always with me wherever I may be
    I miss you dearly.......such a loving mom blessed to have such a loving daughter..... thank u for this poem of love and gratitude and prayer. tony
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2015



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