Wednesday, April 26, 2023

What I Thought... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its hard for me to remember
that dress you wore in late September
when your smile still flared with summer
and your patented rustic charm
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Kevin Patrick
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Liked the recurring lines that enhanced the strength and beauty of this touching poem. To my Poem List.

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A beautiful, poignant and deeply touching poem of love. The superb imagery of this write makes a reader feel the deep emotions embedded in every line.

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Richard Wlodarski 27 April 2023

Kevin, you have so perfectly captured the polar opposites of a love that was not meant to be. I could really feel your very deep pain. Truly...an outstanding poem of bittersweet love and a broken heart. Such a great write!

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Kevin Patrick 28 April 2023

Thanks Richard! as always your comments are wonderful nuggets! Honored you liked it!

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D.N. Rebb 26 April 2023

This is such a good poem. Going right into my favorites

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Kevin Patrick 28 April 2023

Thank you so much for reading and liking it! Bless you!

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Jayne Louise Davies 26 April 2023

Such a beautiful heartfelt poem x A wonderful read : ) Thanks for sharing x

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Kevin Patrick 28 April 2023

Thank you! , I normally don't write on the subject of love! Bless you!

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