Ameera Aidrus

What Is Worst?


Physical harm effect superficial look while mental takes away life’s delight,
I ask what is worst? Is that a curable material or a material eternally without light?

Physical destruction could be cured in hours, days, weeks or in years,
While mental chase till death afflicting the life of loneliness and fears

Man feels he could bear, but his mind and spirit does not assist,
What is a man; devoid of the aid of his own being persist?

A skinned knee or an arm has a therapy of illness,
But once the heart is out of order, life have no remedy for any sickness.

A brain occupied of perplexity and riot leaves a spirit frustrated,
Mentally anxious mind and a heart pierced by the words that aggravated.

Apology may heal the mentally caused harm to some extent,
But could certainly not get flipside to the condition of their prior time that went

The words would smash up a man exclusively, so I say
Imagine for an instant before you unkindly verbalize or betray

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2008
Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 25, 2011

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (9/28/2017 12:24:00 PM)

    A nice poetic imagination, Ameera. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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  • Fatima Sayeed (1/31/2013 7:01:00 PM)

    hey ameera,
    i never got a chance to read your poems, but when i read them i was quiet really impressed
    i hope that you never stop writing.
    liked your poem very much
    take care :)

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (8/11/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Well penned
    Enjoyed reading it

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  • fahmina arjumand Misha (5/13/2008 5:27:00 AM)

    hi
    ameera ur poem is too good really what gave u idea to write on such good topic which is unsen by others...well keep it up...lovely and moral giving too.

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  • Saathi 4u (4/21/2008 10:48:00 AM)

    hi ameera
    i dont know whts ur age.
    i dont knw whts ur education
    i dont knw whts ur stream of education
    i dont know how much hppy u r or hw mch sorrowful u r
    but
    i know by reading ur poem...
    that
    u r qualified by a teacher from NATURE
    i know u hv a soft corner abut the sorrows of psychology
    ur words are true specially these:
    'A brain occupied of perplexity and riot leaves a spirit frustrated,
    Mentally anxious mind and a heart pierced by the words that aggravated.'
    i really thinx for 2 things..one is for reading my poems and sending message to me.this is only initiating me to read u in deep.
    thnx a lot and plz pen more and more poems for the whole lovers of nice feelings.
    with gud wishes.
    saneem.Hyderabad.
    saathi_143@yahoo.com

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  • Julia Wang (4/10/2008 10:05:00 AM)

    Powerful descriptions and strong ideas...

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  • Lynda Robson (4/10/2008 5:48:00 AM)

    Good subject matter and well-constructed thanks,
    Lynda

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/8/2008 9:22:00 AM)

    the brain is complex and unique..............no one is exactly knows its superiority....and weaknesses.........

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