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What Is Worst?

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Physical harm effect superficial look while mental takes away life’s delight,
I ask what is worst? Is that a curable material or a material eternally without light?

Physical destruction could be cured in hours, days, weeks or in years,
While mental chase till death afflicting the life of loneliness and fears

Man feels he could bear, but his mind and spirit does not assist,
What is a man; devoid of the aid of his own being persist?

A skinned knee or an arm has a therapy of illness,
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Julia Wang 10 April 2008

Powerful descriptions and strong ideas...

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Lynda Robson 10 April 2008

Good subject matter and well-constructed thanks, Lynda

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 April 2008

the brain is complex and unique..............no one is exactly knows its superiority....and weaknesses.........

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Ameera. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Fatima Sayeed 31 January 2013

hey ameera, i never got a chance to read your poems, but when i read them i was quiet really impressed i hope that you never stop writing. liked your poem very much take care :)

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Ravi Sathasivam 11 August 2009

Beautiful poem. Well penned Enjoyed reading it

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hi ameera ur poem is too good really what gave u idea to write on such good topic which is unsen by others...well keep it up...lovely and moral giving too.

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Saathi 4u 21 April 2008

hi ameera i dont know whts ur age. i dont knw whts ur education i dont knw whts ur stream of education i dont know how much hppy u r or hw mch sorrowful u r but i know by reading ur poem... that u r qualified by a teacher from NATURE i know u hv a soft corner abut the sorrows of psychology ur words are true specially these: 'A brain occupied of perplexity and riot leaves a spirit frustrated, Mentally anxious mind and a heart pierced by the words that aggravated.' i really thinx for 2 things..one is for reading my poems and sending message to me.this is only initiating me to read u in deep. thnx a lot and plz pen more and more poems for the whole lovers of nice feelings. with gud wishes. saneem.Hyderabad. saathi_143@yahoo.com

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