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#what Makes Life So Great? - Poem by POOJA LADYLUCK

The struggle i started ends here and now
I thought life was easy, cud get thru somehow
I thought they would understand how i feel
But they have forced me into a fake image, discarding everything thats real
Now m just the way they wanted, a replica of the millions of others
I am an image made of mud, hav got no real feathers
but in the end, as i've left the battlefield
These fake wounds neednt be healed
I'd surely ask god when i reach the pearly gates
If every moment i spend faking,
what makes life so great? ? ?

Comments about #what Makes Life So Great? by POOJA LADYLUCK

  • (11/6/2008 10:39:00 AM)

    Life is great but not as a clone. I think you know that you have your own style of writing and thinking and I think you're amazing. Keep writing, (Report) Reply

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  • (10/16/2008 8:40:00 AM)

    True to the core. Amazing....... Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (3/28/2008 10:45:00 AM)

    i really liked your poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, October 10, 2008

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