What's Your Dream? Poem by Deependra Kumar Jha

This poem is a realistical portrayal of the mature dreams with realistical solutions in our current existense.It is a poem about ideals and some ideas that relate to what we need for our future. A clear trajectory toward achieving concrete goals. Excellent poem as usual, Deependra, thank you for sharing.......10+++++++++++

This is such an interesting poem and very well composed. It tells a story all within the structure of poetry and it is skillfully done. The turn in the last stanza is wonderful with so much truth that relays a profound message. 10 love Karin

Deependra, what a lovely piece you wrote. it has so much meanings and depth and its so true. our wait for our wishes never end. thanks for sharing. take care

I echo Kesav's words, there is much truth in what you wrote, for happiness common man must find anther way. 10

truthful words...you give more than a message there...good work...10

So nice. Gives me a new question about this life. What's your dream? I wish you will make a better poem

dreams and their various facets..well described through various sets of eyes

dreams has no borders, its like open space no end, no one can stop us to dream but we should work hard to make our dream become true

“What’s your dream? ” is life it self…we are all dreamers otherwise life wouldn’t be a reality in us. Your poem is a reminder for all of us, which we have to dream. However, we must as well realize that dreaming demands sweat and tears to achieve what we dream. And of course it is a lesson that all of us should learn, that not all we dream are for us, therefore we have to be mature enough to accept the limit- the reality that the things are meant for us are only those we can manage and be master of it. I like it…because I am as well a dreamer.

Your poem is well penned and tells a story of the different people in society, ending with the true dream of the average man. A very good write. a 10. Your friend Lynn