.......It's a depression so deep it finds a way into the Soul,
traveling through every pore of your Heart.
A depression so enlarged, it encompasses every bit
of your Reality,
leaving that Reality, a mere cloudy memory.
A depression so dense, it compresses every will
you once had,
bowing you down to accept that will, as it's own.
A depression so devious it takes you piece by piece,
consuming, each piece,
day by day.
A depression so truly disheartening,
it Leaves You,
with no other emotions.
A depression so dangerous,
it slaughters,
Everything.
Inside.
Of You.
Darrel, I tried to take my life not so long ago and I hope you are battling the demons of depression and that you are not alone. Thanx.
dang intense but very good it kinda fits with me today you know your really good man
This has been countless people's struggles. writing helps. keep writing and keep helping
it is a deep and meaningful poem, maybe just fix a few things in the way you write it, don't change everything just a couple of things. like with devious it takes you piece by piece, consuming, each piece try and use a different word that means the same thing because it just sounds a little off having the word piece bunched together like that. but that is my opinion :)) overall it is a very beautiful poem. and I hope you will write more! :))
this is a beautiful poem. the way it reads, is just how I write and think. x
wow its so true I feel this right now every bit of it my bf some one save me
I'd like to add to this by adding that depression is not a feeling, it just is and once its there it dominates everything else.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
These words are so true and so beautiful. this is just how i feel. i hope you come out of your depression, cause i know it sucks.