.......It's a depression so deep it finds a way into the Soul,
traveling through every pore of your Heart.
A depression so enlarged, it encompasses every bit
of your Reality,
leaving that Reality, a mere cloudy memory.
A depression so dense, it compresses every will
you once had,
bowing you down to accept that will, as it's own.
A depression so devious it takes you piece by piece,
consuming, each piece,
day by day.
A depression so truly disheartening,
it Leaves You,
with no other emotions.
A depression so dangerous,
it slaughters,
Everything.
Inside.
Of You.
Darrel, I tried to take my life not so long ago and I hope you are battling the demons of depression and that you are not alone. Thanx.
These words are so true and so beautiful. this is just how i feel. i hope you come out of your depression, cause i know it sucks.
This has been countless people's struggles. writing helps. keep writing and keep helping
it is a deep and meaningful poem, maybe just fix a few things in the way you write it, don't change everything just a couple of things. like with devious it takes you piece by piece, consuming, each piece try and use a different word that means the same thing because it just sounds a little off having the word piece bunched together like that. but that is my opinion :)) overall it is a very beautiful poem. and I hope you will write more! :))
this is a beautiful poem. the way it reads, is just how I write and think. x
wow its so true I feel this right now every bit of it my bf some one save me
I'd like to add to this by adding that depression is not a feeling, it just is and once its there it dominates everything else.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
dang intense but very good it kinda fits with me today you know your really good man