* When I Feel Alone Poem by Rafique Farooqi

* When I Feel Alone

Rating: 5.0


Tonight i will forget my pains,
As snow is piled up all around,
and glittering in low moonlight,
Mists on windows of my house,
brought some memories biting my mind.
when a deer collided head on,
With my car,
and forgot to cry in despair
loosing vitals in minutes,
And i feel night breathing in silence,
I am with loneliness,
and shadows of dreams,
Yellow light seen
from a distant house,
Awakening pain of my sore eyes,
when i suffer from my sleeps,
spending sound of clock,
and my heart beats,
overlaping the pin dropp silence,
I inhaling a deep breath,
find a book under my pillow,
with title of a cute kid,
reading the 1st page,
Sleep lures me to tranquillise,
and the day comes during time,
I am ready to move,
Good morning,
My soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 06 December 2009

so entertaining to anyone's eyes....i like this piece...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2009

Sleep lures me to tranquillise, and the day comes during time, I am ready to move, Good morning, My soul. .one should avoid lonliness as it kills the person. but the fact remains that you hve to go alonein life//l; ovely poem....10 read mine.......you go alone

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Ejaz Khan 15 October 2009

A sad poem, portraying loneliness and yet ending is full of hope and a new beginning, where sunshine comes to fill the empty quarters of life, a beautiful write!

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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