When I Had The Dream. Poem by Charles M Moore

When I Had The Dream.

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When I had the dream
you were standing beside me
on top of a mountain
we looked down through the glen
some horses were running
free, free through the heather
well that's how it seemed
when I had the dream

We linked arm and arm
it was ever so gentle
you cosied up to me
and gazed at the scene
I kissed your head
as we walked down the pathway
and crossed o'er the stream
when I had the dream

The eagles were flying
and danced in the sunlight
high o'er the loch
you could here their faint scream
we chatted and laughed
and you picked some flowers
well that's how it seemed
when I had the dream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 18 November 2009

A beautiful dream, with splendid imagery.

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Linda Ori 26 November 2006

This is absolutely beautiful, Charlie! Wonderful imagery - felt like I was there in that peaceful space in your dream. I always know I'm in for a treat when I read your poems, and I'm never disappointed. You have such an easy, flowing style to your work - lovely! Linda

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Esther Leclerc 26 November 2006

Such a beautiful, romantic dream, one that could easily be grounded in reality... Lovely, graceful write, Charlie. Esther : ]

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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