Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore (1953 june / Glasgow Scotland.)

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A Beautiful Day - Poem by Charles M Moore

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I walked to the cliff top to watch the sunset
thinking of you and the time that we met
I watched as the sun drifted down from the sky
a reminding reflection of light in your eyes

A myriad birds flocked from over the hill
returning to roost as the world stood still
their fawning and waving high up in the air
brought memories to me how you unfurl your hair

The sea seemed to amble as if in a trance
when reaching the rocks leaping into a dance
its light sparking rainbows in fine misty haze
a lasting encounter of how we embrace

The sun kissed the horizon like I kiss your lips
it was saying goodnight with its light fingertips
caressing the ocean and stretching my way
a beautiful end to a beautiful day.

Charles M Moore

Poems by Charles M Moore : 2 / 222

Louie Aries (6/21/2018 6:23:00 AM)

Wow..so rhythmic like a sweet symphony.. (Report) Reply
Ben Gieske (7/21/2009 8:03:00 AM)

The rhythm is very soft and relaxing. Wonderful the way you interwine so many images and involve so many senses. Very enjoyable to read and visualize. (Report) Reply
Fred Babbin (12/18/2007 2:01:00 PM)

A luv pome with lovely description. (Report) Reply
Ivor Hogg (3/30/2007 5:55:00 AM)

Enjoyed muchly in particular the closing Stanza ivor (Report) Reply
Esther Leclerc (5/23/2006 9:44:00 PM)

A truly lovely poem; especially like the last stanza with its pretty language. Thank you for sharing this sunlit day. Esther : ] (Report) Reply
Duncan Wyllie (5/20/2006 6:54:00 PM)

This would be so worth the read at any time of the day, so much contained, the imagery,
the deep feeling for another and the flow and style all help to make this a 10!

their fawning and waving high up in the air
brought memories to me how you unfurl your hair
Brilliant! ! !

Love duncan (Report) Reply
Myra Jefferson (5/18/2006 8:03:00 PM)

A beautiful day is a beautiful read and a beautiful feel, a needless to say, a beautiful poem. Respectfully, Myra J. (Report) Reply
Con Nie (5/11/2006 8:48:00 PM)

What a beautiful poem perfectly titled. Sincerely, Connie Webb (Report) Reply
Patricia Gale (5/11/2006 1:18:00 PM)

The word beautiful does not do this write justus. Well done Charles. A simply divine read.

Patricia (Report) Reply
Scarlett Treat (5/11/2006 7:31:00 AM)

What a lovely write - the perfect ending to a perfect day. I could even feel the setting sun on my own face! (Report) Reply
Francesca Johnson (5/11/2006 4:15:00 AM)

Charles, I liked the line 'the sea.......when reaching the rocks leaping into a dance.'

Your cliff top, with the sun setting on the horizon, sounds the perfect place for recalling those wonderful memories.

Love, Fran xx (Report) Reply