Monday, June 8, 2015

When I Jump Comments

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When you say jump,
I will jump.
When you say run,
I ask where.
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Tina Hills
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Hannington Mumo 20 August 2015

Oh so well-written. Keep sharing...

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Allotey Abossey 18 June 2015

well blended with much muse and great rhythm...good one there

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 June 2015

This is beautiful write Tina.Liked it.

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Chinedu Dike 09 June 2015

The unpleasant effects of bullying and abuse well depicted in the poem. I guess we must all be courageous and say no to abuse. A nice piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 09 June 2015

This is a fine poem Tina. There are many out there unfortunately not as strong as you. i have written something similar titled To be a Butterfly. please read if you have time.

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Kelly Kurt 08 June 2015

A poem that many women (And even men) can relate to. Thanks for sharing, Tina Peace

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