When I Miss Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

When I Miss

Rating: 5.0


Yes love is same
With honor and fame
Equal too
And this is very much true

Love demands
Nothing but happy end
If life journey
As blessed by almighty

Yes its place
In all cases
Is in heart
To be precious part

When I miss
Offer natural kiss
To miss
Not for ever on face

It is made known
When I was grown
Own it with respect
When go into act

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 02 July 2014

Beautifully said and well written. I enjoyed reading this poem! A+

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good work skylar nighte4 minutes ago this poem was very well written, i enjoyed reading it Comment +1

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Snoopy G2 minutes ago I dont rhyme a lot in my poetry because a lot of times it seemd forced. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it comes naturally to me

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Yes love is same With honor and fame

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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