When I See Clouds Poem by Ashok Suresh

When I See Clouds

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The storm clouds are my favorites;
the misty clouds so merry;
the travelers, I long to touch;
when they disappear in some hurry.

Sometimes they seem to portray;
epics long forgotten and at others;
seem to tell me an unknown;
tragic story of mad lovers.

All these clouds, I love to look;
on the greatest stage yet set in;
But when rainy clouds thunder about;
I run home and get in.

The setting sky so blessed with clouds;
of different shades and colors all round;
And birds and bats of different sorts;
flying as I stand spellbound.

This great scene always make me feel;
the life I live is a blunder;
And its so nice to get lost;
in this antediluvian wonder.

When I See Clouds
Saturday, October 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,nature,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 October 2015

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in poetic diction with good rhyme scheme. A nicely encapsulated poem written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ashok. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ashok S 17 October 2015

Hi Chinedu, thank you for the kind words.. will surely read yours too.. :)

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Kelly Kurt 10 October 2015

A lovely poem, Ashok. I enjoy staring at clouds in wonder too

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Ashok S 11 October 2015

thank you.. clouds are wonderful.. :) how nice it is to see, all that happen up there in the sky.. thank you for taking time to make me happy..

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 October 2015

cumulus clouds.. yes, they are beautiful to see, especially from above.. looking down from an airplanes.. :) and they bring monsoons.. right? ..life needs them.. thank for sharing, Ashok

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Ashok S 11 October 2015

thank you very much.. it means a lot to me.. :)

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