When I See Them Fly I Will Feel You Near Poem by jenie hart

When I See Them Fly I Will Feel You Near

Rating: 4.8


As I look outside I see the breeze
Caress the leaves from the trees
And carry them to all around
Gently laid upon the ground
I see the birds so high above
Their songs sing of our special love
And laid upon their soft sweet wing
Your love to me they gently bring
And as they start their graceful descent
Delivering a message that’s heaven sent
One thing I know and will hold so dear
When I see them fly I will feel you near

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 April 2014

i sent this to MyPoemList. great fitting of words together with rhyming and reason. i especially enjoyed Caress the leaves from the trees. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 06 August 2013

One thing I know and will hold so dear When I see them fly I will feel you near Beautiful! The breeze, the caressed leaves, the birds high above, their soft, swift wings, their graceful descent, songs of special love, heaven sent message and, the last but not the least, 'When I see them fly I will feel you near ' feeling have so nicely been crafted and depicted that one can almost 'touch and feel' these. A masterpiece!

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Survi Sharma 01 August 2013

great write a heart sounding one

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