When Life Meets Wrecking Ball Poem by M.J. Lemon

When Life Meets Wrecking Ball

Rating: 5.0


get a solid grip
take a breath, one step forward
then do it again...

Tuesday, March 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: metaphor
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 27 March 2020

This is the sure way to get over difficult times and march ahead! Well said!

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Mj Lemon 27 March 2020

Thank you, Valsa...Yes, slow, and look ahead!

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Leeann Azzopardi 18 March 2020

this inspiring poem is keeping me sane

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Mj Lemon 11 September 2020

Thank you, Kumarmani. And yes, it it starts with that first step forward...

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Mj Lemon 09 September 2020

Thank you, Kumarmani! One step at a time!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2020

One step forward......this step encourages to march ahead. This poem is beautifully executed with a bright theme.

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Susan Williams 15 May 2020

excellent! Not many poets can handle brevity as comfortably as you do! ! That is one great title- -had to choose to read this poem and see the wreckage! Yes, I am one of those people- I rubber neck whenever we pass a wreck! ! 10+

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Mj Lemon 15 May 2020

Thank you, Susan! Thank you so much. The original working title was Caution Tape....That's now a working title for something new.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 March 2020

This is the stuff of which poetry is made. Marvelous.

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Mj Lemon 29 March 2020

So much appreciated, Aniruddha. Thank you.

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