When My Absence........ Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

When My Absence........

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When my absence
Doesn't make a difference
Do I call all to say
That I miss them;

Shall I arrange for a party, get together
Invite, visit or meet people
How to make them understand
Clearly explaining my mind;

Can i question them and eagerly
enthusiastically, listen to their answers
May I give a statement
Of my likes elaborately;

Or shall I express my dislike
In simple words
Will I demand my things
If I need it desperately;

How could I make my presence
When my best time or
Portion of life is in set back
By love, care and share....!

Saturday, May 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: absence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Set back
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 19 November 2016

Dont say, my absence Doesn't make a difference It makes a lot of difference to everyone who loves/likes you. Who wants you good..

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Rajnish Manga 07 May 2016

When my absence Doesn't make a difference How could I make my presence.... (or the absence felt) ...This kind of a situation may arise in anybody's life and may cause a set back but you have succeeded in making this indifference realised by the reader. Thanks, v.m.saraswathy ji.

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Thanks for the review, it's all self revamping, welcome

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