When Tamas Triumphed Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

When Tamas Triumphed

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Triumphant, tamas on a pedestal,
Pathetic looked the face of a candle,
And what happened, bit odd,
Truth pushed to hide in pod,
Curtain when called, scene was hard to handle.
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Tamas: Area of sloth, untruth and darkness in man's within.
What happens when a whole island of darkness stands triumphant, and poor candle that tries to illumine all along is blamed for darkness? The past is totally forgotten and a curtain falls, as it were, on the candle's lifetime of contribution. ______________________________________________________
Musings | 06.08.16 |

Friday, March 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,despair,truth
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Don't we face similar situations in life?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 March 2019

Pathetic looked the face of a candle...this line tells everything! A wonderful Limerick sir..............10

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 March 2019

You are right Dr Swain, thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 March 2019

Truth pushed to hide in pod AND THIS IS SO SAD and thought provoking. You have brilliantly penned this amazing poem.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 March 2019

Reality of life starker than the dark of Tamas. Thank you Kumarmani M.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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