When Things Go Poem by Aniruddha Pathak
When Things Go
When Google answers for everything,
And You Tube has tunes that all songs sing,
When medics sit in bliss,
There happen things like this.
Patient dies, Death's number dialing!
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Tongue-in-cheek |31.11.2019|
Topic: death, humour, doctor, patient,
Wow- -A great poem on the present day scenario - - -Many things have become easy- -We get all information, music, entertainment, and whole sea of knowledge at the click of the mouse, but people go easy and also develop a ruining attitude towrds hard work and service to mankind.
When Things Go Online not, When Things Go I don't know why PH is not correcting it. Any way your comments are in place. When there is too much dependence on machines, I don't know which way the evolution will go. Online too? Thank you Bharatiji
The caption of this limerick should be When Things Go Online. The word 'Online' is still missing after editing twice.
Well, you are right. A traditional limerick is anapaest tri-meter (first second, and the fifth lines) , and bi-meter for the third and fourth lines. It's alright breaking/twisting rules, provided what is produced is all the better for it, not otherwise. Thanks for visiting.
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 3:58:51 PM # 1.0.0.1119
superb limerick on postmodern user of google, youtube...ctc//
Thanks for visiting and appreciation, dear MB