Shasha Mesha

Rookie - 317 Points (Malaysia)

When The Heart Meets The Soul - Poem by Shasha Mesha

Spooned or swindled?
The ephemeral heart questioned the eternal soul,
For only the soul can quench the thirst of the beautiful lie,
A lie that she heavily relied upon,
And she continued to sprinkle water of hopes on an intricate garden,
It blossomed swiftly and the sight was phenomenal,
Leading to a mysterious yet quintessential path of flowers,
With petals of sunflower tickling her silky feet,
She was convinced that the fragrance had coiled within her,
And then rose a new question,
Should she continue to merely sprinkle or assume a luxuriant garden of her own?

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse

Comments about When The Heart Meets The Soul by Shasha Mesha

  • (9/18/2015 2:57:00 AM)

    I found your poem very mysteriously fascinating and enticing! Lending hope and a future idea blossoming within the soul! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Nisha Nair (9/18/2015 9:23:00 AM)

    I'm glad you found it fascinating RoseAnn, thank you. I always try to add a sprinkle of mystery into my poems.

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  • Kelly Kurt (9/17/2015 12:44:00 PM)

    A lovely, well written piece, Shasha (Report) Reply

    Nisha Nair (9/17/2015 8:10:00 PM)

    Thank you Kelly

  • Fabrizio Frosini (9/17/2015 6:37:00 AM)

    ''Spooned or swindled? ''

    a good question, indeed.. ;)
    WELCOME at PoemHunter, Shasha
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    Nisha Nair (9/17/2015 8:14:00 PM)

    A question that remains a mystery to me. Thanks for the warm welcome Fabrizio

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/17/2015 3:59:00 AM)

    The soul is eternal. and the heart earthly and perishable.
    only the Soul can quench.
    Water of hopes,
    mysterious path of flowers. so these are the points i collected while studying your poem. a really very nice work and mysterious too. thank you dear Poetess. write and write.
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    Nisha Nair (9/17/2015 8:16:00 PM)

    That's a good analysis. Thank you Tony

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 17, 2015

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