When Tomorrow Starts Without Me
by David M. Romano
Hindi Translation by Rajnish Manga
(Partly Translated)
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I quoted the English verse because i know that the Hindi portion will not appear properly
wish so much you wouldI wish you wouldn't cry The way you did today, While thinking of the many things, We didn't get to say.
A wonderful poem Rajnish ji! The poem has moved me so much. Your Hindi translation of the poem is a masterpiece. Just do not know how i missed it.
Without me tomorrow cannot be started. Tomorrow has future and brightness. This poem is well versed and translated.
Thanks for your kind visit and inspiring words about this humble work of mine.
An amazingly beautiful poem translated into Hindi in equally beautiful words. जब मेरे बिन कल सुबह उगे और कहीं दिखाई मैं न दूँ सुबह लाये तुम्हारी आँखों में अविरल आँसू ही आंसू Thank you Rajnish Manga ji for such lovely translation.
It is indeed a great honour to receive appreciation from an accomplished poet of your stature. My sincere thanks to you, Bharati ji.
What a fantastically faithful translation and still so original in all its poetic beauty. I wish I can also do so. Full marks.
I am grateful to you for having posted such an inspiring feedback on this humble translation. Thanks, Aniruddha Sir.
UR EXCELLENT IN TRANSLATIONS AS YOU SHAN'T visit again hence my msg do read RM JI Dear RM sir melodious hearing you after a long sabbatical great do visit again A common man, worker, writer or an artist works sincerely and contributes silently to enrich his living space. Being honest in our endeavour will make this world a better place for one and all. Thanks Sir. lovely message RM JI
But as I turned to walk away, A tear fell from my eye For all my life, I'd always thought, I didn't want to die. But then I fully realized, That this could never be, For emptiness and memories, would take the place of me. SUPERB PLEASE CONVEY YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN ME SINCE MANY A DAY RM
A brilliant poem with a marvellous translation.........100