When You Are Borne And Gone Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

When You Are Borne And Gone

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You come with naked body
As natural as flower
With pink rose face and fists closed
You cried in full and all laughed at you
What did they expect you to become?
Professor, doctor.philosopher, or guide
No one knew what was in store for you
But all hopes hinged on you

What did you do in life?
Amassed enough wealth
Robbed and killed many innocents
Just for self and family members
For bright future and generations to come
Nothing stayed with you as days approached
Bade a farewell amidst curse, blessings or prayers

What did you gain?
Thousands of applause
Millions of hands rose for blessings
For lovely memory as saint, politician or donor
Good acamadecian, social worker or reformer
Golden words from noble man and preacher
Gentleman, son of the soil or martyr
Name worth millions of rupees
Precious than diamond and holy books

Was that worth or enough?
Leave it for future generations to judge?
Single faith and never to budge
Struck to words and principled life
Life like king size as honoured man
Did what ever you could or did

Simple goal, .simple mission with worth living

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moon Batchelder 12 August 2009

absolutely true and well penned...especially liked the title...

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Christina Phan 11 August 2009

Wow well put together 10+

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Rajaram Ramachandran 09 August 2009

When we leave this earth, we cannot take even a eye-broken needle with us. Only the good or bad deeds come with us as (vasanas) experience for our next birth. This poem is an eye opener and is well composed.

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Radha Seth 02 August 2009

All trains come to an abrupt halt, u r born as flower...10

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Saroj Davde 02 August 2009

You come with naked body as it is usual...10

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Reshma Punjabi 26 October 2009

What did you do in life? Amassed enough wealth

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Saroj Davde 22 October 2009

What did you do in life? Amassed enough wealth Robbed and killed many innocents Just for self and family members

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Vijay Suwarnkar 09 October 2009

What did you do in life? Amassed enough wealth Robbed and killed many innocents Just for self and family members

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Sachin Goswami 04 October 2009

You come with naked body As natural as flower With pink rose face and fists closed

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Suwarna Patil 02 September 2009

You come with naked body As natural as flower With pink rose face and fists closed You cried in full and all laughed at you..10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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