When You Go To Sea Poem by Little Sunshine

When You Go To Sea

Rating: 4.8


when you go to sea
remember me

when you need me
please call on me

it is simple to join me
just listen to your heart
you will feel me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blessing Nanier 07 August 2008

beautiful, beautiful.no more than that splendid

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

'it is simple to join me just listen to your heart you will feel me' Moving poem. Short and cute. 10+

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Jack Tex 08 September 2008

short and sweet, tender, expressive, highly emotional, romantic and spiritual with a gentle flow to it.

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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

Write your heart out dear friend, who says expression has to be volumes, I'd rather read a million short poems that hold me captive than one long one that has little in the way of rhyme or reason. Be Well, Nate

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Your poetry is great, I hope your life is not as depressing as that, but if it is it at least helps you write good poetry!

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Mark Swaine 09 August 2008

Hey that was pretty good, liked it, proof you don't need a full page to write something decent, Fairplay!

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