.let The Tears Coming Down From Our Eyes... Poem by Little Sunshine

.let The Tears Coming Down From Our Eyes...

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let the tears coming down from our eyes



I wish I could once in my life

Saw your sweet smile

I wish I could be your sweetheart

For the rest of your life



As it is clear now

You cannot be mine as I cannot be yours

But I know for sure

you will be in my heart and i will be in yours


I see you deep inside me

I can feel you right here beside me

I can smell all these memories that have been left

But I never can look in to your eyes telling you my love for you was just a lie

Coz it was not



I loved you so much

My love for you was so true

But I had to move on with my life

three days ago you came to me telling me “just cannot forget about you”

Then what should I do?



I told you nothing

But I kept everything in my heart

While the tears was coming down from my eyes




Sorry if I could not tell you what I want

Sorry If I did not tell you I love you as I did

Sorry if my silence caused you pain

Sorry if I showed that I had no care for you

Coz I have care more than you ever thought



But that is the way it is

Saying goodbye

Feel the pain deep inside

And let the tears coming down from our eyes



October 30,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 03 November 2008

In this set there's a lot of pain and it's good to respect it.

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Sarah Cook 03 November 2008

wow great job i can understand how that feels feel free to message me anytime

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<font color=black>Nagourta 03 November 2008

Does this person who makes you so sad know that you have this site? If he did, I am sure he would be willing to try again... Good poem, Hataw, I enjoy you sad poems... :)

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Omar Ali Sabar 03 November 2008

This person must be fool if he can't acknowledge your sweetness and love 10/10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 05 November 2008

Ahhhhhhhhh.........................................my heart skips beating! How lovely is your love, your true true love Hataw.A very touching piece and you have touched my heart! ! ! ! !

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Tyease Collins 07 February 2009

Aww this is so sweet. I love how you make love the most important thing ever. You just make it...possible for people to fall in love and be in it for a very long time....enjoying the other person's embrace and quality time. I love it -Tyease

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Sameer Ahmed 18 January 2009

A very good write dear.......you have drawn a picture of teenage love with simple yet, sound words........The description of your loved one and then the pouring out of sad emotions upon seperaiton is really nice......This poem has kept a messege in it of moving on with life if someone fails to attain the love of his or her adored one....and that is how it should be because life never stops for anyone......a compact inspirational poem................10

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Stephanie Fiddy 27 December 2008

i'm sorry you cannot be with your loved one. But this is a beautiful poem and i feel the emotion bounching off the screen. i wish you the best of luck -stephanie by the way 10++

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Blue Eyes 16 November 2008

Sorry if I showed that I had no care for you Coz I have care more than you ever thought u cannot say that, instead say i hadn`t care for u and u should have said see instead of saw

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Blue Eyes 13 November 2008

i do like ur poem but there r some not important mistakes that u need to fix''only spellings''

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