let the tears coming down from our eyes
I wish I could once in my life
Saw your sweet smile
I wish I could be your sweetheart
For the rest of your life
As it is clear now
You cannot be mine as I cannot be yours
But I know for sure
you will be in my heart and i will be in yours
I see you deep inside me
I can feel you right here beside me
I can smell all these memories that have been left
But I never can look in to your eyes telling you my love for you was just a lie
Coz it was not
I loved you so much
My love for you was so true
But I had to move on with my life
three days ago you came to me telling me “just cannot forget about you”
Then what should I do?
I told you nothing
But I kept everything in my heart
While the tears was coming down from my eyes
Sorry if I could not tell you what I want
Sorry If I did not tell you I love you as I did
Sorry if my silence caused you pain
Sorry if I showed that I had no care for you
Coz I have care more than you ever thought
But that is the way it is
Saying goodbye
Feel the pain deep inside
And let the tears coming down from our eyes
October 30,2008
wow great job i can understand how that feels feel free to message me anytime
Does this person who makes you so sad know that you have this site? If he did, I am sure he would be willing to try again... Good poem, Hataw, I enjoy you sad poems... :)
This person must be fool if he can't acknowledge your sweetness and love 10/10
Ahhhhhhhhh.........................................my heart skips beating! How lovely is your love, your true true love Hataw.A very touching piece and you have touched my heart! ! ! ! !
Aww this is so sweet. I love how you make love the most important thing ever. You just make it...possible for people to fall in love and be in it for a very long time....enjoying the other person's embrace and quality time. I love it -Tyease
A very good write dear.......you have drawn a picture of teenage love with simple yet, sound words........The description of your loved one and then the pouring out of sad emotions upon seperaiton is really nice......This poem has kept a messege in it of moving on with life if someone fails to attain the love of his or her adored one....and that is how it should be because life never stops for anyone......a compact inspirational poem................10
i'm sorry you cannot be with your loved one. But this is a beautiful poem and i feel the emotion bounching off the screen. i wish you the best of luck -stephanie by the way 10++
Sorry if I showed that I had no care for you Coz I have care more than you ever thought u cannot say that, instead say i hadn`t care for u and u should have said see instead of saw
i do like ur poem but there r some not important mistakes that u need to fix''only spellings''
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In this set there's a lot of pain and it's good to respect it.