.let The Tears Coming Down From Our Eyes...

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let the tears coming down from our eyes

I wish I could once in my life

Saw your sweet smile

I wish I could be your sweetheart

For the rest of your life

As it is clear now

You cannot be mine as I cannot be yours

But I know for sure

you will be in my heart and i will be in yours

I see you deep inside me

I can feel you right here beside me

I can smell all these memories that have been left

But I never can look in to your eyes telling you my love for you was just a lie

Coz it was not

I loved you so much

My love for you was so true

But I had to move on with my life

three days ago you came to me telling me “just cannot forget about you”

Then what should I do?

I told you nothing

But I kept everything in my heart

While the tears was coming down from my eyes

Sorry if I could not tell you what I want

Sorry If I did not tell you I love you as I did

Sorry if my silence caused you pain

Sorry if I showed that I had no care for you

Coz I have care more than you ever thought

But that is the way it is

Saying goodbye

Feel the pain deep inside

And let the tears coming down from our eyes

October 30,2008
Monday, November 3, 2008
Tyease Collins 07 February 2009
Aww this is so sweet. I love how you make love the most important thing ever. You just make it...possible for people to fall in love and be in it for a very long time....enjoying the other person's embrace and quality time. I love it -Tyease
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Sameer Ahmed 18 January 2009
A very good write dear.......you have drawn a picture of teenage love with simple yet, sound words........The description of your loved one and then the pouring out of sad emotions upon seperaiton is really nice......This poem has kept a messege in it of moving on with life if someone fails to attain the love of his or her adored one....and that is how it should be because life never stops for anyone......a compact inspirational poem................10
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Stephanie Fiddy 27 December 2008
i'm sorry you cannot be with your loved one. But this is a beautiful poem and i feel the emotion bounching off the screen. i wish you the best of luck -stephanie by the way 10++
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Blue Eyes 16 November 2008
Sorry if I showed that I had no care for you Coz I have care more than you ever thought u cannot say that, instead say i hadn`t care for u and u should have said see instead of saw
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Blue Eyes 13 November 2008
i do like ur poem but there r some not important mistakes that u need to fix''only spellings''
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Mark Jos'e 12 November 2008
yea it is a sad poem i like it because its real thats what ussually hapen in real life, nice one.
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Aijaz Asif 12 November 2008
a very touching write indeed...its an old saying that time is the only and best cure and i wish it will sooth you soon....thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif
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Yasser Koor 10 November 2008
nice poem dear Hataw: you started the poem with love and great passion. i like that and i impressed in that love, aaaah i think that is the most beautiful thig in the world, , , , LOVE your writting are amazing and this way and words about love as i said, i really impressed. but and for sorry it was end by goodbye ooh that painfully. anyway in general your poem is perfect but saaaad.
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Micheal Udenyi 09 November 2008
this is so cool i almost wished i was there to watch such a lovely scene of love well desired but left unspoken to watch the tear trikle and fall but never let it drop good luck mate love is what keeps me going. love and never let go
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Seema Chowdhury 05 November 2008
a lovely but sad love story. saying goodbyes are always hard i believe.good luck to you and hope you can get what you wish for.
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