When You Know Poem by Little Sunshine

When You Know

Rating: 4.3


When you know i cannot take anymore living without you
when you know you are the first and the last for me
when you know i am waiting for you till the death
when you know i don't wanna tell anybody 'i love you'
when you know that entire thing
why are you leaving me?
when you have given your heart to me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 October 2008

Better to have loved and lost they say, but it never take the hurt away..

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<font color=black>Nagourta 08 October 2008

You have lived in this sadness for quite a long while, poor lass...

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Thad Wilk 30 December 2008

A sad poem, sometimes love hurt's; if he doe's not feel 'the same way too', then (moving on) is the 'best thing' - for you to do! ! Best wishes Hataw! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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sara }i{ 01 December 2008

well done.......but u must get over it i know it hard but u must to

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 17 October 2008

u expressed ur pain and ur heartfelt love for someone... beautiful... : D

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 13 October 2008

i m scenting hate; when you know you will vamit your rage with your poetry.....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 October 2008

Intense love emitting this poem! painfully sweet! I fear pain! so I am running away fast! opps, must giving u 10++++ heart-felt expressions!

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